A Union of the four cornners

• Artist: Eureka_Anemone777
• Description: It's short but I feel it's detailed in the words. Don't be shy to leave a comment I would like to have some feedback on what I may need to work on. Thank you :3
• Date: 08/02/2010
• Tags: union four cornners

Crease time
Allows love to unwind;
sign to a kind mind
contains expression
in bottled wine.

Comments

[Braided_Twist]

Is it about a love note that expresses the feelings of one person to another? Great poem, wish it was longer. Great potential.

[Eureka_Anemone777]

The bottled wine resembles, bottled up love that people are sometimes too scared to share.

[Graceful Sprit]

i dont get it

[Aloria15]

The bottled wine part, you kinda lost me... but I do understand where you're coming from. its interesting. I love the first three lines especially.