Wonderland

• Artist: gingy665
• Description: About my ex please comment
• Date: 08/26/2010
• Tags: wonderland

Come with me and take my hand
I will take you to a place you dont understand
We will walk through the sand of time
So we can see our past crime
lets swim on the moon
before we know it this dream will end soon
Dance with me on the verge of sleep
My river of feelings run so deep
Its time you go from this place
I dont want you to see me fall from grace
Look into my eyes and you will see
You were supposed to be with me
You leave and let go of my hand
I will wait for you in WONDERLAND

Comments

[runescape_freak711]

this is the best poem ive ever read on so many levels.the words rhyming(not that it really matters),the feelings,the way u worded it.its amazing.and im really sorry about what happened with yr ex...i kno how that feels.but it will get better =D

[Addiction101]

That is really, really sad.
You must have really loved your ex.
I really like how you used your words to express your feelings. Expescially the part that goes,
"We will walk through the sand of time,
So we can see our past crime."