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you always said you would be there and love me
i looked back and you werent there
i looked to my sides but where were you
i cried , i didnt feel loved i felt hated
i would say i dont care when inside im dieing
i try to move on but im not finding love
i still love you..how do i move on
i cry out for help and answers
but i still stand heart broken and sad
with no one there
you broke my heart
YOU LIAR!!
- by reapers angel16 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/27/2010 |
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- Title: you werent there
- Artist: reapers angel16
- Description: i lost someone i really loved
- Date: 08/27/2010
- Tags: werent there
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- Cookie_Booger - 06/22/2011
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Spelling check please.
I didn't feel so much of the emotion. Maybe if you really dug deeper within yourself, and tried to seek a more powerful emotion than heart-broken, hated, lied to and used imagery, metaphors and/or similes, this would have been really great.
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- 101_Itachi - 11/03/2010
- You're not alone. The "love of my life" said the samethings to me, then left me standing speechless. Really good poem.
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