Fly Away Into the Field (poem)

• Artist: Chocoloverforlife
• Description: Pretty ingenious if i do say so myself XP, but seriously, I'm trying to say something.
• Date: 09/14/2010
• Tags: away into field poem

What is the sound of crying?

The pages pinned on this wall surrounding the sea portray a sunset on open water
The paint put on these closed doors whisper of tunnels and archways
The tape put up to cover the sky is the blue of your eyes
The signs put up that say "do not cross" are the yellow and black of free flying bees
Yet i speak only from hearing and hear only what is spoken, because in a world of color, i see only the dull gray of shivering winter nights.

If you can answer my question you have seen too much, if you understand these words you have not seen enough, answer for yourself as to what i say

Comments

[Chocoloverforlife]

thank so much! its nice to know someone else out there looks at these things

[RinAkurei]

Very well written, and the question and response at the end was a really nice touch.