winter has come

• Artist: xll_i_fart_rainbows_llx
• Description: no comment/ description
• Date: 09/25/2010
• Tags: winter come

Run far, run near,
for the winter time is hear,
put on you big coats and you colorful gloves,
for the winter time is just above,
let your mouth melt with sensual coco,
if you hate winter you probably loco,
lets thanks the skys for this awesome day,
with lots of snow and days to play.

Comments

[Gizensha Sakugo]

You need to work on your grammar and spelling. Other than that its pretty good. 3/5