Please Hurry!!!

• Artist: Xfading_echoesX
• Description: One day the one i loved hurt me.He didn't know my feelings for him.i was going to confront him n telling him how much i love him........until i saw him kiss another girl on the cheek.I was heartbroken and terribly hurt so much.the same night i wanted to express my feelings through something and that's how this poem was created.
• Date: 09/29/2010
• Tags: heartbroken

I felt like i could cry that night

i tried but no tears came out

So i thought to myself

maybe my eyes don't want to cry

maybe my heart does

I right once i felt the pain

Inside i knew my heart was crying

it was so rare it wasn't water that was pouring out

It was drops of blood that slipped through the holes and cracks

i pictured it, blood everywhere

pieces of my heat falling apart

it killed me, who knew that the pain.....

t felt harsh, it was so much i couldn't take it

I finally understood why

Ever since

i saw you i fell for it

i fell for all that you are, for all that is

I now feel wrong

I see you don't feel the same way so why try

AAH!!!i feel like screaming

I feel like cussing in your face

the pain is killing me

There's almost no heart left because its breaking away

HELP!!Please take the risk

Hurry my night is fading away

Kiss me quick and make this pain fade

Comments

[Damon6Demon]

as i sit here and read this poem i am listening to 21 guns by greenday add the mood to your tone. overall its epic.

[darkrose1219]

i really like it, im happy that u didnt make it ryhme it seems ppl try to do that when they dont need to. overall very good 5/5 smile