Reality

• Artist: Mari Hadda Way
• Description: Hahahahaha....ummmm yeah i like to write poems and i want people to read them!!
• Date: 10/23/2010
• Tags: realityfictiontruth

In a land lost between reality and fiction,I walk the path of life.
Pain stands and fall upon those who do not weep
and those how weep decrease the pain.
Eternal happiness dose not exist.
lie after lie, mask after mask.
The reality is fiction no longer covers the pain. ninja

Comments

[Aokina]

I kinda wish there was shorter line, because it's like a pause. kinda like the poet is taking a breathe, or thinking about their words.

[Use Preparation H]

To make a good poem, it has to connect with the reader in some way, and to do that, it has to have meaning that both the writer and reader understand.