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Lonely as i can get
Maybe i can just forget...
Tears are being shed...
...On this poem that's being read.
I've been broken
Now i've finally spoken.
Now keep reading for the ending,
For i'll keep getting men to take my heart and they'll keep on spending.
No... Its ruined and i'm bleeding
As you and i keep on reading.
As a flower bloom,
Its in its doom.
Summer...
Its just a bummer.
Maybe these chains shatter...
Or does it even really matter?
These tears won't stop.
Okay, i'm done! Lets take this to the top.
I will die
As this pie...
...Starts to rot!
I will not--
Oh forget it...
I'm done and you may call my soul a twit...
- by Disturbed Orphan |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/21/2010 |
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- Title: Broken Poem
- Artist: Disturbed Orphan
- Description: I was sad about a break up with me and my bf.... He left me for another girl. He messaged me and said he didn't want to cheat on me so he broke up... It kinda doesn't make sense but i wanted to make a rhyming poem.. I don't expect to have a lot of raters so.. yeah.....
- Date: 11/21/2010
- Tags: broken poem
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Colorful Killjoy - 12/03/2010
- Yea 4 the most parts its good but some of the virses dont go with the poem
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- pink Maylin - 11/27/2010
- i like most of the vrises but some of them feel like they dont fit 3/5
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