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Standing in the moonlit sky, wondering, thinking
How did it come to one, just one promise to start this all
A shiver running down my back
A cherry blossom caught in a breeze
And a faint whisper of a child's voice
"I'm back, and you broke the promise"
A promise i made once, a word, or is it a meaning
It's just pain, death, and lies
I wonder for a moment what would happen if i started over
Just a second chance, I broke a promise
And it can never be fixed
I wonder, I wish, i need forgiveness
Is there such as forgiveness or just a dark space of words
As I stand back looking at the moon
I say aloud
"Please forgive the promise i have broke"
But no matter the begging or the pleading
I can't bring a loved one back
As I sit and weep through the tears I see A cherry blossom
Is this it? The end?
A blade of silver shines, and then.....
Darkness, loneliness, but I'm done I don't have to worry anymore
"A promise is a word through the mouth, but one you make a promise involving someone's life it's to much and you can't bare the feeling of promising to protect someone most dear to you." ~xD Lifes A Game Dx (AKA Skye)
- by xD Lifes A Game Dx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/06/2010 |
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- Title: A Broken Promise
- Artist: xD Lifes A Game Dx
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Description:
I know thats it's kinda wierd and maybe even bad i got really really bored
but this did happen to someone i once knew if you understand the poem - Date: 12/06/2010
- Tags: cherry blossom
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Comments (2 Comments)
- A Sweet Panda Dream - 12/06/2010
- But rated a 5 and i love your work new fan..
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- A Sweet Panda Dream - 12/06/2010
- Very passionate, did this really happen to someone? and i love the last saying at the end, the only problem is how you you used some words and how you say "A blade of silver shines.." shouldn't it be "A silver blade shines.."
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