Thinking

• Artist: Liliane10409
• Description: I´ts my first one, Please don´t be so Hard.
• Date: 12/21/2010
• Tags: thinking

I´am siting on the Pc for BBC,
to writing a letter for Peopels with no matter.
Many Peopels Cry then other Pepoels Die
or then they lie.
My head is burning from to
many learning,
and im searching for things
that doesn´t exist on any links.

Comments

[Liliane10409]

Thanks for the comment.

[vardofive]

The first time always hurts...You've got some syntax errors there but there are some redeeming qualities too: "...searching for things that don't exist on any links" that is a good line.