the question

• Artist: kryptic_valiance
• Description: i wrote this some time ago and decided to post this up here. it's pretty short, but i think it's alright. read it aloud.
• Date: 01/02/2011
• Tags: question

Trapped within the sands of time,
travelling the depths of one's own mind:
a path to nowhere, long and winding.
Stepping with confidence, but walking blindly.
Aligned among these heartless hinds,
desperately searching for truth divine,
realizing that consequence might be binding,
leaving us wondering, Is the truth worth finding?

Comments

[kryptic_valiance]

thanks

[EarlsGarden]

rly good
no comment on improvements
hope you write more (:

[Scarletgreen]

this is amazing. <3 I love it!! Definitely 5/5, easily. You rhymed and worded it beautifully.

[Freya Goddess Of War]

I really like this poem. I hope you continue to write, for I would love to read more of it. biggrin