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That day was quite embarrassing
Especially when you looked at me
I would feel my cheeks burn
Though I wouldn't agree
And my mind would go blank
As we sat at the big tree
Even though it had been a few weeks
I still acted this way
And it seemed each time
No matter the day
You would kiss my forehead
Then we would have nothing to say
When I first was able to kiss you
I missed and kissed your nose instead
I thought it was so stupid
And I almost immediately fled
But you laughed all the same
Then you would pat my head
Today you tell me something strange
That we hanged out too little
Even though my friends thought it was a lot
And how we barely talked
But we easily could have if you had asked
Then...you said at school we act like friends
So, you decided we should just be that
Yet...why..I ask myself....just why?
....humans can be so confusing
- by YouAskMeToDance |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/20/2011 |
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- Title: May one tear release the rest
- Artist: YouAskMeToDance
- Description: The poem vents about what happened today, I'm so confused.....I don't care if it seems like I'm being too 'whiny'. It makes no sense why this had happened, and how I didn't see any signs of it? So many contradicting evidence...it seems impossible...
- Date: 01/20/2011
- Tags: tear depressed breakup confused
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- vardofive - 01/29/2011
- Syntax! But other than that the sentiment of this is great. i especially liked when you missed and kissed the nose. i think if you reworked this a little bit you could make it much better. As it is it's pretty alright.
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A poem I wrote about a year...