Destined Souls

• Artist: Shackled Soul
• Description: This is a poem I made from thinking about that special person. Inspired by a classical song and my love for her, I created this piece.
• Date: 02/09/2011
• Tags: destined souls

Destined Souls

As I lay in my bed
Thoughts begin to run through my head
Wishing and dreaming
Suddenly gleaming

Imagination takes over
It projects images of you and I

As I dream there's a beautiful blue sky
With clouds passing over the warm sun
Here begins our fun

Laying next to one another
Wanting to abide
Side by side

We see each others face
Our hearts begin to race

A calm wind begins to pass
It brushes through the trees
It brushes through the grass
It caresses your hair as we begin to stare

My soul is filled with glee
A connection we cannot see

I move to you
As you move to me

The innate feeling of bliss
I will never miss

Our lives were meant only for this
We touch . . . we kiss

Comments

[Blarff]

I enjoyed reading this because I have felt the feeling, I have dreamt that dream. We have looked through each others eyes, felt each other from the inside. True love, so distant, but the sun will always rise. Life, to live, 'tis a sad, beautiful prize.

5 *

[queen of new twerk]

hi. i lurked. i did. you got some mighty haters up in hurrr, bro.

I agree, the rhyming was a bit off, i think it would have been better if it was a free verse instead. As I was reading this, I thought, "wow, so I wasn't the only one who wrote poems like this."

-tres out of cinco, broski

[Mizuki Ayu]

Your choice of where to rhyme is odd but overall I like it, I think whoever you wrote this for is very lucky ^^

[2pound]

sooooo corny and sooooo forced. why did you rhyme this poem? it has no rhythm to make the rhyme feel natural, so it feels sooooo forced. 1/5

[[ Eats Babies ]]

This was beautiful, that girl sure missed out on a prize.

[Shackled Soul]

I understand why though

[Sicerin]

awww im sorry *huggles* thats not nice of her.