a whisper unheard

• Artist: Fallen Dawn XI
• Description: just something i wrote because it at the time was how i felt
• Date: 03/13/2011
• Tags: whisper unheard

The wind guides my wondering spirit far away from this waste lands,carrying me like a new born infant watching me make my journey home.As dawn approaches as does my heart melt away in your hands whisper to me that sweet tune again.Night is now a pon us my body trembling with fear my sorrow is unheard and so are my deepest fears.

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[ll Sexual Feeling ll]

very good. bravo.
just two things; *upon and it needs better grammar