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Frost was in your voice everyday
Every piece of nature you touched started slowly to decay
Too bad one of them was me
You threw me into a frozen, black sea
I then began to drown and slowly die
I raised my hand in the air and waved goodbye
I would not let you kill me though
You thought you had delivered the final blow
[Chorus]
My heart was frozen over by your hate
Numb, I could not see what could have been my fate
I finally brought the fire
To end your icy desire
You crossed the line
Looking in your eyes sent chills down my spine
You tried so hard to murder me
Needles of ice was your key
Since you sent a million flying into me to open me up
I would much rather bleed myself dry and make you drink and choke from the cup
I forsee it as your fate now
[Chorus]
At the end of your pathetic dances with my heart
You would always take a bow while tearing me apart
How could I not see I was only being used?
At the death of each day you would leave me abused
You are cold as ice
Hardly anything you said was the slightest bit nice
The frost of his personality is a plague
My life had been the most happiest shade of jade
You wilted it and turned it black
I am never coming back
[Chorus]
Don't bother calling my name
You screwed everything up
And what we had will never be the same
Beware the boys of ice
They are bound to to deceive and kill with a quick slice
Let us bury them deep in a frozen grave
End the murder wave!
Give them hell
Surely flames must dance with ice as well
I could not survive your icy prison
I am not the kind to become frozen
Death of my kindness is what you craved
To be the cause of death of our bond is what I braved
Your Hell is eternally frozen over...
- by AmayaAng3l |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/06/2011 |
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- Title: Boy of Ice
- Artist: AmayaAng3l
- Description: I was in a really, really pissed off mood when I was writing this. Mainly because a jerk I used to be "in love" with broke my heart. I will not name any specific names, but I will say that he treated me like crap. Which led me to write this song. Robert Frost is an inspiration to this because for some reason his poem "Fire and Ice" was in my head when I was writing this lol. I think I did pretty well on this, even though I don't write songs very often.
- Date: 04/06/2011
- Tags: deathangerbrokenheartboysicefire
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Night Dreamer Mystery - 05/14/2011
- Yeah, I agree with what the others before me stated, but that didn't really matter to me.. it all still fit within the parameters of a song. I LoVe the contrast between fire and ice that you used, it made since once I read you were thinking about the Robert Frost one while writing this =P. Your narration, diction, flow, delivery, spacing, rhyme, message.. all of it.. Amazing! I thoroughly enjoyed this and found it all very relatable. *adds to favorite*
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- AmayaAng3l - 04/30/2011
- Some part are jumbled, yes. This is the first song I've written since like 2 years I think since I was focusing on just poetry for a while. I really do love and appreciate the feedback though biggrin .
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- Zlae - 04/24/2011
- I loved the idea behind this, but some parts are a little jumbled. Very good, though. Favourited, for the idea.
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- Gardeford Superior - 04/22/2011
- It's rather good, but there are parts where the first sentence is too long or short compared to the other.
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