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On wings of Summer
I flock to the timberland
Dreaming of you deer
- Title: Haiku #7
- Artist: Hong-Nan
- Description: A haiku about summer love.
- Date: 05/26/2011
- Tags: haiku
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Comments (3 Comments)
- KKlil123 - 06/29/2011
- yaa haikus r only 5 sylible 7 sylible 5 sylible very very short.....
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- Hong-Nan - 05/29/2011
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A Haiku is supposed to be that short and I made a conscious choice with deer.
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- Somebody Called Cheyenne - 05/28/2011
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...to short. It's not bad, it's just way way to short. Put more effort and feeling into it. Also, the last word 'deer' should be 'dear'.
I am not being mean, simply critique. - Report As Spam
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