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They blew bubbles to the sky
A bubble that they whisper it with their hope
A bubble that they whisper it with their wish
A bubble that they whisper it with their dream
Feels so magical when see it floating
Carrying all of their hope, wish, and dream
Even though hard or impossible they'll always try to catch it
A bubble that they whisper it with all of their goal of life
How long can it float in the sky?
How high can it fly before it popped?
How far can it carry all of their thoughts?
The questions is never meant to be answered by the silent bubble
But, it meant to be answered by us
How far your hope, wish, and hope help you living?
- Title: The Bubble
- Artist: ASAPDOPPE
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Description:
my second poem xD
please leave comment for my poem so i can fix the mistakes :)
i'm a rookie in poetry
so, sorry for wrong grammar or anything else Dx
enjoy :3 - Date: 06/15/2011
- Tags: bubbles poem white saber whitesaber31
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Rkah - 07/12/2011
- I like this. Its would be amazing with some capitalization and punctuation. Like honestly I would absolutly love it if it didn't look so amature. Love, love, love the poem. Work on the grammar. Much Love, Marni.
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