Window Face

• Artist: Okaami
• Description: Rate & comment for me? :D
• Date: 07/09/2011
• Tags: window face

Her chestnut eyes were her tell
And silent lips spoke volumes
Her window face would show so well
Lit up just lit a full moon.

Window eyes and window lips
And window fair complexion
A thought could never hide behind
Her window clear perfection.

Comments

[Ravencon]

I didn't really like it but keep trying, because I believe this poem good be improved to be even better.