Within me

• Artist: HisDarknessAngel
• Description: All the poems i write are from my feelings within me. i do not make them up to entertain people. I write in the form of expressing my inner emotions.
• Date: 01/31/2012
• Tags: dark darkness sadness emotional

Fire darkened like cyclone demons,
Scattered blades of shredding screams,
Multiple emotions trapped inside this distorted figure,
One to only fear of myself.
Piercing through these mindless humans,
To prey upon those who deserve death,
Endless craving for something more,
Forever they hide....away within my eyes.
This inner demon of darkness shall live within my soul,
What you see is a girl in pain,
I do not write a poem of darkness,
I write a plead to be freed from this horror,
Now you can fully understand and see,
This true pain living within me.
A pain that only the strongest of souls can take in,
A feeling so great that comfort is very limited.
I do not ask for comfort, i do not ask for help,
I ask to be freed, so life can be fully safe once again.
I need you here , here with me
Your presence scares them off, makes them go quiet,
I cannot sleep because im never left alone
Im afraid of something bad to happen.
These sudden urges are not stopping but are controllable.
Waiting for you to be with me here is excruciatingly hard.
Every night before i sleep my heart screams out to you.
As i lay here....scratching the suffering...
This is what i live with, this is my life, this is my nightmares in living actions.
I plead to be freed.

Comments

[HisDarknessAngel]

Because this is self explanatory, this is how i see my emotions. And in the world i live in now people are so stupid that they can only understand things if their written in simple form

[PleasureToii]

It's nice to write to let feelings express by words.
But why not add some Irony, metaphors. Don't make it so self explanatory and simple.