The 4 Birds

• Artist: Kyomara
• Description: This poetry gives a lesson,Can You Find It?
• Date: 06/05/2012
• Tags: birds fight lesson

There were 3 birds that were fighting for who flies more far,
but there was one hearing:

Bird 1:
I'm Happy,
I'm Glad,
I'm always number 1#,
No one would beat me,
Cause I'm the best of all! mrgreen

Bird 2:
I'm Sad,
I'm mad,
I can't think a thing.
I can't even shout,
my life is ruined,
I didn't win! crying

Bird 3:
I'm angry,
I'm grunchy,
I'm just going to explode,
I'm thinking and thinking,
this must be a joke!
I would get him,
would squeeze him,
for making me this!
I feel so embarrased,
cause I didn't win. evil

Bird 4:
If you three wouldn't talk before thinking,
then they were no one loosing and no one winning. neutral

Comments

[Nemone]

Uwahh, so harsh. I wouldn't worry about it belonging or not belonging here too much, poems can tell a story, and frequently do.

[nbetweener]

How is this a poem? It's a child's fable and belongs in fiction. As a poem, since it's here...total crap.

[Chante_Charmgirl]

Its not all about winning