Our love

• Artist: minxy2012
• Description: S.besley
• Date: 11/22/2012
• Tags: shane besley love

what can i say about me and you?
our love is precious our love is true.
our love comes from deep within.
our love is wholesome and is not a sin
our love is stronger than any bond
our love will last as it is so fond
our love is visible to the naked eye
our love reaches way up past the sky
our love is the universe inwhich we live
my love for you is greater than massive.

Comments

[Slinkenhofer]

What I got out of this poem is this:
"Our love is special and unique, but I'm going to use huge, arching generalizations to express the depth of emotion I feel."
The language of lovers isn't vague. It's specific and unique to the individuals that share that bond. Instead of focusing on the rhyme scheme, focus more on articulating your feelings in an eloquent and specific way. 1/5