Aubrey Adam - Illusion 2

• Artist: Seltzer Cole
• Description: This is the second Aubrey Adam poem I have written. The first can be found in this arena. It is to be read as if somebody is speaking to you, trying to teach you a life lesson through riddled poetry. Please comment if you would like and thank you for reading. Favorite me if you want more. Enjoy! ~ Seltzer Cole
• Date: 07/31/2013
• Tags: aubrey adam illusion accepted neglected

My name is Aubrey Adam and I am a mixture of everything.
I come to you now so I can show you something.

One side of me is white
The other side of me is black
Light from the front
Dark from the back

What is in front is accepted
What is behind is neglected

My face is made of two
I live inside you

What would I become
If I combined into one

My name is Aubrey Adam.
I am a mixture of everything.
I say to you now that I hope you’ve learned something.

Comments

[Koram of Tamas]

Like the form and rhythm. But I think more needs to be said about what it means, and maybe include the idea of the grey area between the two halves.

[Seltzer Cole]

Now why didn't I think of that...*Brain shuts off* Duuurrreeehhhuuh? Thanks for the suggestion.

[definite_blonde]

i like it, the only thing i would change is what is in front is accepted what is behind is rejected fits better.

[Seltzer Cole]

Aubrey Adam is attempting to teach you something. Mwahaha.

[Ochalissah]

Learned what? The final line messes is up because I do not see how we could have learned anything...