So Far Gone

• Artist: Seltzer Cole
• Description: A poem I wrote about life, love, and betrayal. Favorite me if you want more. Enjoy! ~ Seltzer Cole
• Date: 08/06/2013
• Tags: gone betrayal memories story love

From the very moment
Nothing lasts
How you end
Will make a past

The story written
Is your choice
The person reading it
Will hear your voice

Words spoken
Memories continued
A chain reaction
People you live through

What is your story
How will it entail
What is your story
How will it fail

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I can’t wait to share
Your tale with everyone
I can’t wait to know
When it is done

Does it matter
What you learn
I’ll make you unhappy
Your dreams burn

I know who you are
Person with a tuned heartbeat
I bet you don’t know
The secret person I meet

Go ahead and write your life
Go ahead and add a chapter
Go ahead and write some more
My audience needs laughter

Now come closer
I must tell you
A little closer now
I’ve betrayed you

Comments

[Seltzer Cole]

I get ya Ocha, if you look it is actually broken down the center. The first 4 paragraphs are as if it is an intro and the last 5 are as if it is being spoken by somebody. But yes very confusing perhaps. I wrote this awhile ago. =P

[Ochalissah]

I got so confused on this one. Right away in the beginning I was lost. Then the end, I feel as though it was just thrown at me without something to ease the message of the final line.

[FireflyGirl19]

Wow..just wow