Lulu's Eyes

• Artist: EdietheKitty
• Description: I wrote this for a young Lady I like.
• Date: 10/22/2013
• Tags: lulu eyes love darling touching

Your gaze is striking, it hits me hard;
I often wonder what it might do if I drop my guard?
What is it you see through those eyes?
Is it Whats? Is it Wheres? Whos? Whens? Whys?
Would you be able to see it if I cry?
What is it you would see if I were to lie?
Would it be a question, or anger?
What if I said it was to keep you safe?
To keep you far from danger?
What if you never knew me, and I was a stranger?
Would you still like me?
What is it you would see?

Comments

[Kihaku_Wolf]

I wasn't a fan of the last two lines, but Pfft. This was incredible work. Great job! Didn't think I'd find something I really enjoyed within the poetry on Gaia. You incorporated emotion/feeling that wasn't artificial. Well done! Thanks!