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my story
mom son and new guy chapter3
The thing that save Miyu was a man about 5'9 with long black hair with blood red highlights and ruby red eyes. He had on a white botton-up shirt and black baggy pants, around his neck with a black collar an a dog-tag with a paw printer on it . He had two rings both silvar and red.User Image
He had one arm wrapped around Miyu's waist and the other holding
Cloud by the shirt. Miyu eyes were wide open stare up at the man thats
saved both her and her son's life. The man gently sat CLoud down and
allowed Miyu to sit down, he started checking Cloud to see if he got harm.
Seeing nothing wrong with the boy, the man moved over and started checking Miyu.
"T-thank you sir" Miyu said still slightly shock. "You're welcome my name is Hiro"
"My name Miyu thank you again" "it's nothing"
Then out of nowhere Hiro was tackle to the ground by Cloud.
" Thank you mr.Hiro thank you." Cloud kept say it over and over again.Hiro started laughing as
he sat Cloud down and messing up his hair. " you're welcome little guy,
so is his your little brother?" Hiro asked " Oh no he's my son Cloud" Miyu explain while looking down. Hiro got up and put a hand
down to Miyu so he could help her up. " I would have never guess he'll be your son" "Yea that's what
alot of people say" Miyu took his hand and stand up, she looked down
at her watch to see it read 4:00 "Well me and my son need to go now" she said as she about to pick up all of her bags
but Hiro picked them up for her " Let me hold these if you don't mind if I walk you home" Hiro said " no not at all" she said looking up at Hiro.
Miyu started laughing when Cloud up on Hiro's shoulder.
They all started walking back to Miyu's house.






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Sapphire_Moon14
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commentCommented on: Tue May 15, 2007 @ 08:23pm
it was a good start, but i think u need to add a little more to it. sweatdrop


commentCommented on: Tue May 15, 2007 @ 08:57pm
stare *shoves Krystal out of the way*
Ahem... well, anyways, personally, I think it's great the way it is! mrgreen I totally can't wait for the next chapter! ^^ You should let me beta them sometime! 3nodding *wants to read it before everyone else* ( xd )



FutureSorcererSupreme
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Dark Hearted Chris
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commentCommented on: Tue May 15, 2007 @ 11:55pm
*Shoves Amy out of the way* It's okay... You should also let me preview them.


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