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my story
mom, son, new guy chapter 2
chapter 2
AS Miyu and Cloud walked home from shopping, they each carried about three bags each. Miyu was singing a beautiful song that Cloud could listen to all day long.
~What I thought wasn't mine
In the light
Was one of a kind,
A precious pearl
When I wanted to cry
I couldn't cause I
Wasn't allowed~
Cloud would just kept on looking up at his mother.
~Gomennasai for everything
Gomennasai, I know I let you down
Gomennasai till the end
I never needed a friend
Like I do now
What I thought wasn't all
So innocent
Was a delicate doll
Of porcelain~
Miyu just kept on singing her heart out, enjoy her son company.
~When I wanted to call you
And ask you for help
I stopped myself
Gomennasai for everything
Gomennasai, I know I let you down
Gomennasai till the end
I never needed a friend
Like I do now~
Miyu and Cloud waited for the cars to stop going and when they stop Myiu and her son walked across the street.
~What I thought was a dream
A mirage
Was as real as it seemed
A privilege
When I wanted to tell you
I made a mistake
I walked away
Gomennasai, for everything
Gomennasai (Gomennasai), Gomennasai
I never needed a friend,
Like I do now
Gomennasai, I let you down
Gomennasai, Gomennasai, Gomennasai,
Gomennasai till the end
I never needed a friend
Like I do now~
Just as they got to the other side of the street and speeding car came out of no where and nearly crash into Miyu and Cloud but something pulled her out of the way and that thing was...






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OLD MARION
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commentCommented on: Sat Jan 20, 2007 @ 07:31pm
Wow!
That was a beautifull song!


commentCommented on: Fri Jan 26, 2007 @ 08:56pm
nice chapter, Miyu-chan! ^_^ (heh, I couldn't figure out all the lyrics to that song when I heard it on that one mix you gave me... thank yew! ^^;;; )



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Dark Hearted Chris
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commentCommented on: Thu Feb 08, 2007 @ 10:52pm
[ Hi this is Christopher Lee Bricker from school. I like this story but it could be a bit more graphic. Still love your stories though!! Looking forward to reading the next one at school!


commentCommented on: Wed Feb 21, 2007 @ 09:41pm
meep! I haven't seen anybody else from my school on here yet, and I've been a member for awhile!! (I recognise the name, I'm one of her *points to Marluxiaxgirl13* best friends from school.)



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i_am_with_beutiful
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commentCommented on: Tue Mar 06, 2007 @ 01:41am
miyu your back on finally what was it ahhh got to know what grabbed you anyway glad your back on need to keep writing it is good love ya heart heart heart


commentCommented on: Sun Apr 22, 2007 @ 07:53pm
You have to keep writing. smile You're making it suspenceful. I can't take it. scream
I want to find out what happens next.



Sapphire_Moon14
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