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I wrote this a few weeks ago!!!


Rigor_V
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Failed To Dream

I awoke in the night...my head still swimming
I felt so empty...with my lack of dreaming...
I tried and failed to conjure your image...
it is as if on my mind...you are a blemish...
I cry out your name...in the darkening haze...
but to my weakness...my cry has no faze....
I miss the touch we once did share...
now I am alone...it is something I just can not bare....
This feeling of empty...I have felt it before...
I had once discarded it...and now...it reutrned for more...
I guess they were right....
it is in plain sight...
they were right....I am weak...
and my future...it seems so bleak...
I guess I was a fool to see our future as one...
but..now...there is nothing that can be done...
I will hang my head....in agony and shame...
but....do not worry...you are not to blame...
I carry my fault...like a carry my lonely...
I return to the darkness...where I find it homely...
My search for light...will continue once more...
I will await in darkness....behind closed doors...
The best things in life...sometimes are not what they seem...
do not be like this fool......who failed to dream...





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2good2beforgoten
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comment Commented on: Thu Jul 26, 2007 @ 08:16pm
crying crying crying crying OMG COREY!!! that is soo Deep!!!! I dont know what to say!!
Just keep searchin dont ever give up corey DONT!!! crying heart crying Corey This is so wonderful, The words are so meaningful heart crying This was A BEAUTIFUL POEM!! You have such a wonderful way of expressin your feeling!! GRAT JOB!!!


comment Commented on: Sat Jul 28, 2007 @ 03:59pm
you did good...i liked it like all the other ones...



eternal crimson nite
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Vampyre in the stars
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comment Commented on: Mon Jul 30, 2007 @ 03:37pm
Breathtakingly beautiful.....But I hope you are not in as much pain as I am in........


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