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I wrote this a few weeks ago!!!

Rigor_V
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Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 @ 04:06am

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	Only a Whisper Erase the peripherals the all seeing eye endless thoughts concieved as trivial seeking a cure that is purely medicinal yet, the greatest realization are those of lies broadcasting suicides as if subliminal dreamscapes summing up as simply baron clueless justice is merely criminal resolving to the primal state of animals they see it happening, but none are caring Endless notions of love, forever yet, what is the dream without a plot? calling it a nightmare from induced terror feeling delivered by an unknown bearer such conceptions this mind hath wrought....

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I will believe in you
no matter what you do
I am not going to judge
and do not be confused with their sludge
together we stand
divided we fall
apart we are weak as grains of sand
united we are a tree and we stand tall

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eternal crimson nite
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Commented on: Sat May 10, 2008 @ 03:42am


	I really liked it Corey! You should publish your poems!

Commented on: Wed Jul 09, 2008 @ 12:46am


	i love your poems Corey.....you should publish them 3nodding

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Vampyre in the stars
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Commented on: Tue Jul 22, 2008 @ 04:34pm


	Damn Corey! That was amazing! Electricity surged when I read it and the words still ring in my brain! My new favorite. Even though it was a hard choice. lol xp

Commented on: Wed Feb 08, 2012 @ 09:37am


	You, know in a way ,the way you wrote this reminded me of shakesSpear! I love how much soul you put into your work. I applaud you biggrin

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