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My ramblings and doodles
these are a mix of my thoughts, possibly poems, photos, and tekteks i've made... have fun reading
i saw someone today who has a shop creating poetry so i thought i'd put some of my own up... hope you like reading them 3nodding

The icy myriad of greens and blues swirl,
gathering strenght
Tiny diamond flakes dot its glossy surface,
as trembling worlds combine
Scooping up sand and shells in its icy embrase,
the tumbling soup eddies and flows
It grows,curving, frothing, bubbling and swirling

The wave crashes

Tiny bubbles tickle my feet as the wave ripples,
just barely covering my ankles

droplet falls
taking with it
memories as it
traces unseen paths
many before had followed.
the tear slipped down my
face and splashed
onto my open


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  • User Comments: [2]
    Those are really really good!! Beautiful imagery.

    comment Treehugger93 · Community Member · Fri Jan 25, 2008 @ 12:13am
    rofl Holy cow your poems are awesome! The second reminded me of Emily Dickenson, she better watch out

    comment NausicaaVW · Community Member · Sat Jan 26, 2008 @ 07:20am
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