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i feel like we are sliping apart are friendships not as good as it was from the start i feel it's dieing like a rose in the winter and the pain is just another splinter once happy once cool now relized i was played like a fool i said it was to good to be true i geuss i was right cause away you flew you flew far far away and it is kinda hard to say if you will ever ever be back someday i finally got past my poets block and wrote this ^^

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Commented on: Sun Jun 22, 2008 @ 06:32pm


	woah... burning_eyes this is really good.. honest it kinda blew me away xD

Commented on: Wed Aug 06, 2008 @ 09:56pm


	i like this...i wouldnt ever use cool in a poem...the ending was ify

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Commented on: Wed Aug 06, 2008 @ 11:31pm


	this is my favorite so far. again, your flow needs work. besides that, i think if you emphasis the lonely feelings you express slightly, you can make this a pretty moving piece.

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