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The Daily Ashiya
I JUST thought of this song and I didnt want to forget it so posted it in my journal!! tell me what you think k? but be truthful! if it suck you can tell me!


How do I know what you say is true?
how can I believe these things you say?
I will hold fast to the things I know
to the things Ive seen.
How can you say you love me?
Why should I believe that you are the one for me
and only me?
you tell me what you say it true
But
Ive seen you kissing her in the dark
Ive seen you hold her tight and whisper in her ear
Ive seen you with those longing eyes
that were not for me
you left me wondwering where you were
for her
why should I believe the things you say?
why must you pretend
that you still love me?
you tell me that Im the only one for you
how do I know thats true?
I will hold on tight
to the things I know
to the things Ive seen
to the things I believe
that Im not
the only one
for you






User Comments: [3]
i P A U C H I E
Community Member





Thu Aug 21, 2008 @ 02:08am


this really struck me straight in the heart.
did you made this for me? cause it seems to fit so exactly...
crying


karn4mdabay
Community Member





Mon Aug 25, 2008 @ 08:23am


i like ur poem... song its cool i just dont know how to sing it... right


TheOneWithoutFear
Community Member





Sun Sep 21, 2008 @ 07:50am


That's awesome Natalie! MAybe, if we have your permission, my band CMC, can make it an official song! The we can send you a copy of the video and see what you think. But only if we have your permission to do so, otherwise, it's a break of copyright.


User Comments: [3]
 
 
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