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The Last Good Fight
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Water Spirit
Chapter 1, Water World
One stormy day, 16 was left inside his house alone and trapped by the stormy night. He stayed in the corner of his room, alone yet a kind person. He was named 16 from of the years before his mother died. His father says its 16's fault whic causes 16 to doubt what happened in the so called accident. He was also 16. 16 also had a strange appearance, black hair as any usual color, but his left eye was blue as his right was red. He was spoken as a fallen angel because of the bright blue eye but as well as the dark blood like eye.
he stayed in his corner, afraid to go out of his room, because his father might hit him like the many times he has. His father says that 16 can never do anything right. He thinks its true too. 16 usually came out of his room to go to school and that was it, but on the following morning that will all change........
That morning, it was just as what all days that had a large down pour had, mornings that had a faint breeze with the smell of wet plants, trees, grass, and anything else. He awoke to a strange feeling, as though he was called to the window. He opened it and was quickly drawn to the ocean. 16 was thinking of venturing to the ocean, i mean his father wouldn't miss him.
16 carfully climbed out te window and slowly climed down the vines on the side of the window and hopped the fence. He ran towards the beac and walked along side the shore. Everything seemed normal till he saw a blue haired girl washed up on the shore. As the hero he is, he ran over to her and checked if she was alive. She opened her eyes and screamed.
"what has happened? Does thou High Council resent thee?" The girl spoke in a poetic manner.
"umm, who are you?" 16 asked.
She screamed again and backed away. "who areth thou?"
"i'm 16." He answered as he repeated the same question.
"16, what a wonderful name tis' you have."
"i dont think it's wonderful, not wonderful at all," He clenched his fists in the thought of his name.
The girl saw him and asked, "what thou troubles this broken heart?"
"it's nothing...anyway you still haven't told me your name."
"Ame, thou beeth my name. It tis the French for soul."
"why are you--" 16 just realized when Ame stood up she was naked. He shielded his eyes and rephrased his question, "why are you naked?"
"does this thou bother you?" she looked at herself. "i shall fix tis problem."
The water started to move and Ame raised her hands. Soon water rose and covered her body. It later became a beautiful blue and purple blend dress. "does thou please thy being?"
"how did you....do that?" 16 almost fell to the ground.
"i tis the Water Spirit of thou Pacific Ocean. I was tis sent here by thy High Council for thou apparent reason i do not know."
"what?"

continues tomorrow!!!





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xXFalling_RedXx
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comment Commented on: Fri Sep 12, 2008 @ 11:25pm
awesomeness! so creative! please continue!!!


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