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The Last Good Fight
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chapter 3, elegance (continuation)
Ame was in complete shock. She never seen 16 with a face like that, cold, heartless, merciless. Helena was just usual fiddling with her hair like nothing happened.
"if you're wonder why i'm not shocked it's just that he did this before, when we were younger...." Helena got off the box she was sitting on and explained her story:
"it was a couple years ago, when we were 12? i think..."

Helena Narration: we were at school, 3 big bullies were picking on me because of my hair it was too long and it was a deep black. They were pushing me around and around it hurt bad. Then 16 came up and told them off.
"hey you big bullies! lay off the girl or i swear i'll beat you down!"
"or what shortstack?" One of the bullies laughed.
"you'll hurt us with your disformed eyes?" Another chuckled.
I just stood there wondering is 16 was gonna get hurt or not. The bullies pushed 16 and punched and kicked him. He didn't do anything, i was gonna get the teacher but he said not to.
then this is the strange part, as one of the guys was about to punch him he grabbed his arm and twisted it! The guy cringed i pain.
The stranger part was that 16's expression was the same as you see now but his red eye was glowing.
he kneed the guy and he fell unconsious, the other guys lunged at him but he twisted them both by the shirts, turned his own body and threw them both into the pool outside of the school zone!!
but the weirdess strangest part was that 16 hurt his arm nd twisted his ankle because of his fatso dad!
when the teacher came by he just said, "hi teach! what's up?"
his expression was back to normal and it seemed like nothing happened.
the teacher asked, "werent there 3 other boys with you?"
16 just smiled and said, "really? i didn't see them i should go apologize." 16 started to walk off he thought no one else was looking but i saw him smile devilishly as he walked off. End Helena Narration

Ame couldn't believe it, was 16 been faking the whole time? Wa Ame wrong about the Pure soul?
16 came around the corner and said, "ah, you guys i knew you were gonna follow me," He sighed. "well anyway lets go it's late."
he smiled and walked away. helena went her way and Ame followed 16 far behind and hesitantly






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xXFalling_RedXx
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comment Commented on: Wed Oct 01, 2008 @ 10:17pm
big shocker! surprised
16 appeared to me as the laid-back kind guy.


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