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scrubskitten
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This is a poem that I wrote for my creative writing class. Please tell me what you think of it (my class seemed to like it, though I don't):

An Ode to Childhood

While reminsing back to my days of early adolescence,
I can clearly remember how new things seemed back then.
I was hardly used to the mysteries of life,
Though I never really thought about them.

All the weekends and summers spent mainly outdoors,
Nowadays feel like a memory that's faded away.
The friendships from days of elementary school,
Some there, some gone.
At times I find myself wondering how some of them are,
But I guess I won't know, for I don't know where they are anymore.

In the same, white apartment, sixteen years flew by,
Back in my early days, I never thought I'd be there that long.
It's just in my years of Nickelodeon, Disney and cartoons,
That I think about most often.
The time when I wasn't allowed to watch or do much else.

At some moments, I wish I could travel back in time,
To a place when my life was so much simpler,
And there was never much to worry about.
Not too quickly I then remember - time moves forward for a reason:
If anyone could ever really go back,
No one would ever want to leave their early adolescence.






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Akeioni
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comment Commented on: Tue Sep 16, 2008 @ 03:51am
Aww Tabi! I love it! Its so meaningful, and kinda sad cause its really how teenagers feel most the time.

Its really good, I loved the ending.

Your a wonderful poet.


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