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Venting, Ranting, Raving and Yelling!
Whenever you think life can't get any worse, you turn the next corner and there it is......Life......with a pie...then SMACK!! Right in the face! And you never see it coming! No matter how many times it's happened! -_-
iSong-or-iWhips
Well...I wrote a song.

Yes. I, me, this one, has written something other than a rant or a freaky story. And the song came to me in a dream. A frickin' dream, and I remember the music to it and everything.
It's sorta like Genitorturers and Hanzel Und Gretyl had a 3 (4? 6?) way with Lords of Acid. This is how the dream started:

I was in a mall full of iStores. iPhone, iClothes, iComics. It was horrible.
My mom was dragging me through this horrible mall getting me things I didn't need, clothes I didn't want, it was horrible.
Then we ran into a bunch of her pretentious friends, one of them was some gay guy drinking iCoffee. It was showing him the stock market or playing music or something. I hated it. But then he took out an iPod. It was MY iPOD!
He hit the button and every screen in every window of the shops in the mall played a music video.
I got up from my chair and walked a little closer to one of the screens and saw a set what looked like a factory setting with black and red hues with smoke and steam. (As I watched the video and listened to the music and lyrics I remember fantasizing as I always do, as if I were awake) There was a dominatrix dressed in the normal leather and fishnet gear. She was pale-skinned, about 200lbs. and a head of ratty, messy black hair in a ponytail on top of her head. She was using various tools and toys (riding crop, whip, chain) on a scrawny guy in assless chaps and a gimp mask. Sometimes you'd see her singing the lyrics to this industrial-goth-punk-other genre song. I remember a lot of the lyrics and the moment I woke up I wrote them down.

The tempo starts slow but it speeds up around the first chorus. Hehe, listen to me, sounding like a song-writer. How silly.
I'll shall share:

I've got the deepest ache
I've got the deepest ache
You've taken my heart
You've taken my soul
C'mon, c'mon, take more, more, more!

My body is yours
Rip me apart, rip me apart
I've got an itch so deep
Only you can scratch, I'll do anything
for you!!

("Do you like whips?" wink

You are my greatest risk
You are my deepest fear
My fantasies consume me
My fantasies abuse me
Please, I'm begging, use me, me, me!

My soul is on fire
Tear it apart, tear it apart
I need your help to release
Abuse my body or I swear I'll take yours first!!~
("I wonder if you're into that sort of thing..." wink
I'll take yours first!!~
("So what's your favorite...Toy? Position? Hehe." wink
I'll take yours first!!~






User Comments: [1]
Cyphre
Community Member





Thu May 21, 2009 @ 01:39am


Sounds like a music video waiting to happen! xd


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