Neil stepped out of his home. On the inside it was plain but from the outside it was magnificent. Marble pillars stood all around the home. It was two stories high and each window had a unique design to it. Neil gave out a yawn as he stepped off the porch and on to the sandy beach. The water was only a couple feet away from the house. Neil never appreciated what he had. If he broke something he could always get a new one within a few seconds.
Neil looked around the beach and could not help but feel bored with the same old scenery. "Excuse me sir," said a cute maid standing behind Neil. "Your parents want to know if you will be out late." Neil shrugged. "It is up to me. Tell them to get off my case. Also tell them i want a new home. This place is boring." "But sir we have only been here for three days." Neil looked back at the maid. "Just do it and do not give me any back talk!" The maid lowered her head and walked away. Neil grinned. He loved power and money. He thought he was happy but never really knew why he felt a little empty.
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I am simply writing of a girl who has no way of ever being accepted by society unless she is mean. She tries hard to make people happy but in the end she is hurt. Neil is also a character who is spoiled and does not appreciate life.