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Hello, Angelics!

I adore your Glory concept, and what you are trying to do at it's heart, but I have some concerns regarding it.

I'm not sure what you mean by stating they are like "the Amazons". There are many different tribes in the Amazon region, and they are very different from one another. If you mean the Amazonian women of mythology, then I'm afraid it doesn't work at all with your concept. The Amazonian women were warriors, that was their entire purpose, and they fought brutal battles.

Would it be better to state that you mean for the Glory to be matriarchal?

Also, your concept of "Love" as a special skill is extremely vague. What do you mean by that? Could we have a few sentences? How, exactly, would the unicorns be able to use "love" as a skill?

Also, I'm not sure I understand your location. The Meadow is actually quite a distance away from Argent Tangle, and Argent Tangle is a huge area of land that comes between the Meadow and the Beach. They would not be able to see the roses from GloryHeart Meadow at the Beach, nor roses that are in Argent Tangled. They'd have to bring the roses to the beach.

I really adore your concept and would love to work with you to make it work well! <3

Cheltsie