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  • Assassin in the Rain
  • Title: Assassin in the Rain
  • Artist: Goddess_Keiara
  • Description: This artwork was drawn by me and photo shopped by a good friend of mine.constructive criticism welcome.
  • Date: 04/10/2009
  • Tags: assassin rain
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Alis Volat Propriis - 04/12/2009
  • I think the jaw line shoud be a bit more angular and her face more sharp. that way her cheeks dont look fat. A good way to avoid that is to lightly shade under the cheek bone to show depth. that would fit better with her body. Great work though! ^^ 4.5/5
  • MiriKitsu - 04/12/2009
  • I actually really like this. The whole idea in general appeals to me. I absolutely adore that dagger.

    The only crits I'd have is that the tongue is a little too dark and the neck is slightly too long. Also, when shading the hair, try not to draw the individual strands like that. It looks good, but the style differs from the rest of the picture which makes it stand out oddly. And lastly, her right breast seems slightly too pointy.

    Very good job though. I like it a lot.
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