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Snowflakes fall
strong winds cry
I wish time would stall
i just might die
My heart is aching
the wool is warm
I am breaking
and I am torn
Winter is cold
freezing is norm
Trees covered in mold
trails are worn
I listened to him,
we were ready to wed
My love on a whim
and now, his is dead
- by Vampirenote13 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/07/2008 |
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- Title: Cold Misfortune
- Artist: Vampirenote13
- Description: I was heartbroken last year and i wrote this to empress my sad feelings. I know the holidays are supposed to be happy but, cold expresses other feelings too. Its about a girl who's fiancee stopped loving her and it happens to be snowing and the day of Christmas when he canceled wedding.
- Date: 12/07/2008
- Tags: snow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Surrendering On All - 11/28/2010
- aww you must've been sad D: be happy >:O 5/5 very good >.<
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- ceresB - 01/28/2010
- Sad.
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- aztec panda - 08/03/2009
- good i give 5/5
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- Coldhearted-x - 02/24/2009
- great i give 5
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- xPiNK_TiNKx - 01/19/2009
- Very good peom 5/5
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- Vampirenote13 - 12/14/2008
- The guy ise not dead btw, just his love towards her.... the last part is confusing otherwise
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- Vampirenote13 - 12/14/2008
- I wrote it Myself . ALL by myself. The wolf represents how she feels. If you read the image it says "everything hurts. No escape" I love how the poem came out too. She just found out her fiance doesn't love her anymore and shes running in the cold. Hence the snow references and the worn trail.
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