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You look at me and what do you see
Someone that’s pure in heart.
Then I turn the other cheek
That’s when the madness starts.
You smile happily with glee
When you see the side of my face.
But when you see the other side you’ll say
“I shouldn’t have looked in the first place”
I’m the light inside the shadow.
I still can not get out.
If you looked inside my mind
You’d see what I’m talking about.
I lurk within an endless tunnel.
Forever searching for light.
The more I try to make peace
The more I start to fight.
Until I reach the end of the tunnel
And see rays of light on the floor
I shall remain two faced
On and on forevermore.
- by Juliano of Hellsing |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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Comments (7 Comments)
- kitty1234599 - 06/04/2011
- wow wow wow wow wow XD 5/5
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- Rosen_heart - 03/29/2011
- It's very nice, and I love the story around it. One minor thing is that I don't feel like it's flowing very nice. Something with the length of the senteces and long and big words.. Probably experience. Good luck =] 4/5
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- soh_mama1 - 01/03/2011
- 5/5 man. nice poem
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- XoX_Dreamless_XoX - 09/09/2010
- Wow.Such a great poem write you are.I'll give you 5/5!!! Enjoy your holiday christmas!
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- SoulEaterGirlx - 08/09/2010
- Great Job!
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- XRoxySmart_gurlX - 04/05/2010
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Amazing!
5/5 smile ) You are indeed a great poet - Report As Spam
- Newbie200 - 02/06/2010
- I loved it!
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