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moon glasses hollow,
shimmering,
shining,
sparkling,
hazing over the plastered ground,
consuming the sun that is darkening,
crumble,
crinkle,
snap,
upon the trees stored branches,
sitting amoungst the snow,
crush,
crunch,
pop,
ice below my feet,
seeking warmness upon my heart's beat,
sizzle,
boil,
fizz,
sending my heart into pearol again.
- by bribri1992 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Moon Glasses Hollow
- Artist: bribri1992
- Description: a winter sadness.....o well XD
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: moon glasses hollow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- XoX_Dreamless_XoX - 11/14/2010
- I'ma try writing a poem, but I'll probably suck.
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- Fredella - 09/29/2009
- I think your poem is good & that you're a good writer too smile
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- bribri1992 - 06/13/2009
- all of you are so kind thank you ^^
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- pinconojo - 02/15/2009
- i like it 5/5
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- kimonocat09 - 02/06/2009
- you are a true genious at imagery, i gives a five...and thank you for reading my poem... there are more to come...if you need any more help just pm me, k?
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- Merleawe_White_Wolf - 12/26/2008
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very good...nice descriptions too...
I like! XD - Report As Spam
- bribri1992 - 12/24/2008
- brianna...it's Alburney XP
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