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BROKEN HEART.
I write these words in blood so you know that what i say is true.
I have been forgotten by you.
You promised to be true and yet it was another promise that fell through.
I want to keep a hold of you.
Can you see my love for you is true even when i am blue I only have love for you.
It feels as though your stealing my soul.
My heart is ripping apart.I feel cold loving you.
Is this that you want me to feel?
I thought we were meant to be then you set me free.
How can that be?
how true can it be if you just left me .
The tears I've cried for us to stay together seem to have just ripped us apart.
I have no idea what to do now that your gone.
I feel as though i am stuck in a hole with no way to get out.
I finally am falling apart.
Can i glue myself back together when your through?
- by Tempist_rose666 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Broken Heart
- Artist: Tempist_rose666
- Description: I wrote this poem because i have have loss many people i have loved.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: broken hearted
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xdarkendangelx7 - 10/09/2009
- really good poem
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- Nilton D - 07/06/2009
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poetry comes from ur experinces
and im sory for urs
this was a powerful poem
no master peice - Report As Spam
- Mota Clan 31 - 06/28/2009
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nice poem
i like it - Report As Spam
- SweetAngelAmanda - 04/26/2009
- poems dont hav to rhyme but over all i liked it
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- Coldhearted-x - 02/24/2009
- yeah its great...reminds me of my old GF
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- Daous - 01/22/2009
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yea that was pretty deep reminds me of my poem i did
it was really guud i enjoyed it - Report As Spam
- xxRubZxx - 12/29/2008
- wow, that's such a deep poem, your so good at writing poetry :3
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