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Darkness, a shadow, falls over me.
My judgment has already been cast.
Eyes clouded to the point where I can't see.
Thinking things out is always left for last.
Indigo fire points out the way.
Hard to tell what's really right and wrong.
I should never be allowed to stay.
I don't know if I can be here that long.
Purified light, reconstructs my withered soul.
Show me how worldly lifetimes are spent,
clean up this life that's been smeared in coal.
Maybe my mind can be put up for rent.
Forever bound to the reaches of space.
Soon to vanish, without even a trace.
- Title: Shadow Soul
- Artist: HCTotorro
- Description: I wrote this poem a few years back when I used to be all doom and gloom status. I used to think the absolute worst about everything. Especially during the holidays.
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: shadow soul
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Comments (7 Comments)
- kuter pie - 01/29/2009
- that my best 1 k so ya like it alot...
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- i_lv_toby_and_shadow1 - 01/27/2009
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read the first sentence i knew it was good 5
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- iLocoCocoMoco - 01/24/2009
- ahh...so depressing...but it is an awesome poem...gave it a 5/5...
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- SnowyMay - 01/23/2009
- This is the best!!!!! biggrin
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- Goldslime - 01/23/2009
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awesome
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- LoveMeCupcake - 01/20/2009
- its sso awesome i love it alot! 5
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- iTofuu - 01/09/2009
- awesome! its shows much depression but the faint light of hope to eradicate the darkness. very emotional. :]
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