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Soon Chrismas will be here.
then New Years.
Soon after winter will clear.
Winter has come but soon will go.
Then there will be no more snow,
and the sun
will shine bright again.
Time for a family
to come back close
and exchange
cares and thoughts.
Now here come
parties and beer
Now the New Years here.
- Title: Winter's Holidays
- Artist: Artainia
- Description: Its a little poem that I did abought the two holidays that are in the season of Winter,Chrismas and New Years Day. ^_^
- Date: 12/15/2008
- Tags: winter holidays christmas newyears
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Comments (7 Comments)
- hazelle rose - 01/08/2009
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i agree about it......
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- Frozen Chrysalis - 01/06/2009
- Hmm I agree with Bobadhee and Kugome. At first you think you know what its about, then it gets very vague and go's another direction. But It's all right in a generic way. 3/5
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- Xxxcarashka_mischkaxxX - 01/06/2009
- ,,cmple lng peohmay sense!
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- Nobahdee - 12/30/2008
- Kugome is right about the incoherency. At first I thought I knew exactly what you were writing, but then the poem kind of splits off into different vague directions. Not only that, the flow of the poem itself is a little inconsistant. But otherwise it's pretty well done. 3/5
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- Fayne Darkness - 12/29/2008
- Its nice but lack of incoherency is clearly evident and we can comprehend this to an extent but still marvelous job. 3/5
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- sasori of the red sand 34 - 12/26/2008
- i like the beer part
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- ii_bbygurl - 12/23/2008
- u forgot ur t in "CHRISTMAS"...
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