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Alone I shake and shiver, huddled, frightened from the cold
Like that last freezing raindrop, that quivered as it rolled
Down the window pane and stopped, to watch the dawning of the day
The timidly twittering sparrows as they set out on their way
The slow and sickly sun that slides, lethargic through the sky
Clusters of dazed people, aimlessly hurrying by
Calling out, I try to join them, but I’m paralysed on the ground
Doomed to gasp and shudder, while this icy world spins round
Outside, nature twists and sways, a puppet of the breeze
My stomach moves in tandem, I feel sick down to my knees
My heart has frozen solid, and I fear that I might die
When all at once the ice is smashed, and I begin to cry
The sun grows brighter, warm and well, the world is strong again
The blue sky shoves the clouds away, no more a fear of rain
No longer will I live in fear and cower from the cold
In this world meant for the boistrous, the brave and for the bold.
- by weezieishness |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Winter Morning
- Artist: weezieishness
- Description: I wrote this poem about two years ago. While it is called Winter Morning, and it obviously describes some of what was happening that particular morning, it is also a metaphorical analysis of things I was going through personally during that time. Other than that, what it means is up to you to figure out!
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: winter morning depression
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Comments (4 Comments)
- kryptic_valiance - 12/18/2008
- awesome. i love how it starts off sad and ends up happy. it reminds of a poem i wrote. 5/5
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- imarshmallow-dreams - 12/17/2008
- "wow" that was really nice. I couldn't relate it to a story of empowerment.as you say it had some thing to do with your personal life. It seemed to be just a story of the weather outside. still doesn't take away it was really very nice.
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- Dark Serraphim - 12/16/2008
- This is quite nice. I am unexpectedly impressed. That's a very good poem!
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- half-d3mon - 12/16/2008
- I think you're a good storyteller. You give quite descritive scenery, keeping a rhytmic poetic pace that fits in and it is easy to imagine on our head.
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