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when i saw u
i was afraid to not look at u
when i look at u
i was afraid to smile at u
when i smiled at u
i was afraid to hold ur hands
when i hold ur hands
i was afraid to kiss u
when i kissed u
i was afraid to leave u
when i left.....
i was afraid to come back
- by imsouljagurl9 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: when I
- Artist: imsouljagurl9
- Description: this poem...ummm...so this person was shy.....at the end he didn't cam back :( T.T....
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: friends note love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- S u g a r h y p e - 12/17/2008
- It's great. But the grammar could be wayyy better. 3/10
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- imsouljagurl9 - 12/13/2008
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thx u guys...
and ka peace.... - Report As Spam
- gurl123456 - 12/12/2008
- coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooll
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- XD_Yuki-Kiryu_XD - 12/12/2008
- 5 stars !!!!
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