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Holiday is a day to remember,
holiday is a day for everyone to be joy!
Joy is to share with the person you care,
the person you will bring you joy!
Be cheerfull during holiday,
make you life fill up with happy memories!
- by SEForeverLove |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: holiday,joy and happyness
- Artist: SEForeverLove
- Description: nothing much to say,so dont ask^^"'
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: holidayjoyandhappyness
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Comments (2 Comments)
- SEForeverLove - 12/13/2008
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thank for the comment^^
my english sux! hahaXD - Report As Spam
- xFuzzinator - 12/13/2008
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Nice Yui!
Though there's a slight error,cheerfull is actually cheerful....
But who cares,your poem make sense,doesn't have to rhyme..
5/5 - Report As Spam