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You look at me and what do you see
Someone that’s pure in heart.
Then I turn the other cheek
That’s when the madness starts.
You smile happily with glee
When you see the side of my face.
But when you see the other side you’ll say
“I shouldn’t have looked in the first place”
I’m the light inside the shadow.
I still can not get out.
If you looked inside my mind
You’d see what I’m talking about.
I lurk within an endless tunnel.
Forever searching for light.
The more I try to make peace
The more I start to fight.
Until I reach the end of the tunnel
And see rays of light on the floor
I shall remain two faced
On and on forevermore.
- by Juliano of Hellsing |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Terrrra - 12/31/2008
- It's really good, but how is this a holiday poem?
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- Fayne Darkness - 12/29/2008
- HOLY s**t!!!! Did you write this all by YOURSELF???!!! Usually I would have to make some sort of comment like lack of Coherency or whatev but WOW L-O-V-E IT!!!!! infinity+infinityx1/5
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- Curly whirly - 12/28/2008
- BLOODY HELL!!!! (mind the language sorry every1) i loved it 5/5
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- Mourn Alantae - 12/27/2008
- that's amazing! u r really good!
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- XxDIVA CHILDXx - 12/25/2008
- not baggt it should one side of u and the other
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- ll W E i R D - G A S M ll - 12/23/2008
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OMN!! i <33 this [:
it is great..
especially since you put some rhyme and rythm into it [:
50000000.5 [:
i rated your poem can you rate mine plz?
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- scruple - 12/21/2008
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Nice ;3
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