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Snow is falling down
Cuddle up with some cocoa
And hand out presents
- by Yazuki Ookami |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: Holiday Haiku
- Artist: Yazuki Ookami
- Description: It's just a haiku about handing out presents and drinking hot chocolate.
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: holiday haiku
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Papi Americano - 10/18/2010
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I to love haikus
They make me cheerful and smile
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- We The Forgotten - 12/12/2009
- No bad. I like random haiku's though. But still I'll give ya a 5/5
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- Yazuki Ookami - 12/05/2009
- Wow, apparently you guys didn't pay attention in school. IT'S A HAIKU!!! IT'S SUPPOST TO BE SHORT!!!! You know, the 5-7-5 rule?!!! Wow....and wtc? Do you really need to start cussing?! What's the point, and your comment didn't even make any sense.
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- XxSnowAngelPrincessxX - 10/12/2009
- This is a haiku people, but I agree you should of been alot better a**. 2/5
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- Samaritan-Si - 06/25/2009
- Needs a bit more
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- xxwhite_asian_girlxx - 05/08/2009
- it waz kinda short...but...if u added more it would be pretty good
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