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snow is here
gather around
time to tell a story
without a grin or frown
getting the chills of Christmas fever
will saint nick bring me
chocolate from sweden
my Christmas list was long
oh please santa will you
give me my presents
i haven't been bad
i haven't cryed
make my christmas day full of excitment
bring me my present fast
i promise i'll make it last
i wont abandoning it like the the others
i will keep it safe in my hands to smother
please, please, please
wont Christmas come
i want to see the elves
so they can give me some gum
oh that rhymed Santa
what do you know
can i have my present wrapped in a bow?
i am waiting Santa
for to long now
im starting to make a frown.
Christmas eve. is today
i wonder if i'll be the nicest of all
i would stand up talli wouldn't fall
can i be the best?
Santa i wanna be a good girl
the one that shines among them all
Heres my Christmas list with 1,000 words
i hope this isn't a blur
its Christmas day
please Santa give me my present
i look under the tree feeling surprised
all i see is a green box with a card inside
I yell to my mommy what could this be?!
she said I don't know, maybe your lucky
how could i be lucky with no present to open
I ran outside for some reason
in fact i ran outside to another season
one of my wishes was a pool
ah man i was fooled
I realized Santa did give me my wish
to think before i do something
so the next time i give Santa a list
it would whip up a dish!
- by Metsfan7716 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: santa grant me my wish
- Artist: Metsfan7716
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Description:
christmas is near
can you hear the wind??/
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: christmassantasaintnick
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Comments (6 Comments)
- haertstrings - 05/16/2009
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i think it would be better if there were more rhyms
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- darknessangel101276 - 01/30/2009
- plz check out mine its called darkness within i thought it was ok
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- Metsfan7716 - 12/27/2008
- yeah ok my teahcers have there masters and they know more and i got an a
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- Kaye Des Gladius - 12/27/2008
- If you got full credit for this poem, then good for you, but she's right, the grammar, punctuation and spelling is terrible. Don't be mean to her; she was only trying to help.
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- Metsfan7716 - 12/26/2008
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my grammer is right idk wht the hell u talking about
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- Renee the Rabid Squirrel - 12/24/2008
- Well, I got the moral...but...let's face it. Your poem was pretty bad. Here's why: your grammar needs major re-haul, as does your punctuation. Not to mention that you can't spell well.
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